Let’s tackle student editing!
Every lesson in an ELA class needs tweaking. Rarely do I teach any short story or grammar lesson exactly the same. Of all the particulars in an English class, writing – always writing – is what changes the most.
Getting students to invest in their writing is important for all stages of the writing process. I’m always searching for new ways to approach writing with students. Most often, I model writing.
I model editing too because the editing portion may be the most important. I’ve found it to be the biggest struggle for students.
When I ask students to edit, they roll their eyes, ask if they can turn their papers in because they are done! As ELA teachers, we must teach students to edit.
Students really should read their papers multiple times when they think they are done. This improves their papers’ flow. Use whatever metaphor you want – fine tuning an instrument, polishing a car.
They will find small areas – tiny phrases to switch, transitions to add – that will create the flow their papers need. Sure, they need to check spelling and punctuation. Editing is much more though.
When students get to that point, they will experience the wonder that is taking an idea, developing it, crafting it, and seeing a finished piece of art. I tell students they will experience a sense of accomplishment after properly editing their papers.
That is what student editing should be, but it does take work to get students to that point. At the start of the semester, I am specific with student editing and become less specific as we progress. Here is how I manage student editing.
At first, be specific with student editing…
Make lists with students. Commonly, my writing anchor charts include:
- weak sentence constructions (there is/ there are/ subject, linking verb, predicate adjective)
- a lack of transitions, or weak transitions
- citing correctly (commas and periods with quotation marks and parentheses)
- an abundance of adjectives and adverbs, or particularly weak modifiers
If students struggle to edit alone, I bring them back to the specifics we used above. I ask students to go through the lists on our anchor charts. They either like the structure, or they catch on that they should develop their own editing style.
Every year, editing with high school students proves the most difficult part of the writing process. Students might lack direction or investment in editing. Hopefully, these tips gave you a starting point to improve student editing.